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Review:blueirony says:
I don't get it.

You have Lily running away from home. Away from the Weasleys and Potters. They're always so loving and family-like but now Lily has run away. And you barely mention them. It's just hanging there in the background.

And... for some reason it works. I don't get it. It just does. It is so far removed from everything Next Gen story I have read but it's not bad. It's brilliant. But I am struggling to understand just how you have done it.

Your characters are brilliant. Even though they are all OCs (with the exception of Lily), they all have a purpose. I get frustrated when I read stories where there a bunch of new characters and they just seem to be there just for the sake of being there. I don't get that here. All your characters have distinct personalities and I love how you have written all of them.

I also love the football references. Trust you to do put them in! :P I don't actually know a whole lot about football but I can get pretty fanatical about the cricket and AFL so I understand how Annie felt when her team lost. That made me laugh, though.

Please keep writing.

Author's Response: I am so, so sorry it's taken me so long to respond to you. :( I took a bit of a vacation from the archives and am a terrible person. I hope you can forgive me.

Thank you so much. I love (love, love) your work, so such high praise from you makes me ridiculously happy. I really enjoy this story, so I'm really glad that you like it so much. I often have the same reaction to OCs, so I'm very glad that you think that mine are real and developed and all.

♥

Thank you. Really. You are amazing and I love hearing that you like my work. It brightens up my day.

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