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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Such a powerful chapter.. just, wow. The details, I've mentioned previously, are just remarkable.

Sirius is gone. With the personallity switch you've given him, I can't say i'm too sad about that. Although I wish Sev would believe her! But I get it, stuff like that doesn't always work out. He seems like he really wants to believe her, but this attack just pushed him over the edge.

I really don't want there to only be one chapter left!

Author's Response: It's great that the details worked for you! :)

It's funny to re-read this along with you in responding to these reviews, because I'm just now realizing fully how many shocking twists and turns I built in, in the form of sudden deaths. I think we get that in canon, too; just one green flash and then it's all over for you.

It's good that you can sympathize with Severus. It tells me that I put equal emphasis into both him and Lily, which is what I wanted.

Thanks for another excellent review! :)

Amanda


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