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Review:explosion says:
After you responded to my last review, I figured it was only necessary to start reviewing your story more often because I kind of looked like a really terrible person saying I usually don't review stories if I don't get a response (But don't worry I'm not expecting a response!). I didn't mean to sound annoying and I know you're busy, it's just I find people who don't respond to reviews are those who get a million, which means there's nothing I can really say that hasn't already been said by the kajillion other reviewers. BUT ANYWAYS.

I've actually read this chapter twice so far, not including the millions of times I reread the last scene with James and Aggy dancing and then Potter becoming insanely jealous of Ryan. Oh and also not including the parts where you describe how insanely sexy Potter is in the glow paint. So, in short:I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

You managed to literally take, the most outrageous idea for a chapter, and not only pull it off, but make me obsess over how amazing this chapter is. Not that I didn't already obsess over your story before... (I mean your chapter Explode pretty much did that for me) but now I'm obsessing over your story even more (if possible).

You're writing is phenomenal. You're descriptions of things are actually what I love reading the most (yeah I'm a loser). Like the part about Potter's eyes always shifting, and the description of the hairbrushes fallen like corpses. It's funny because besides looking forward to what comes next in your story, I look forward to what new descriptions you'll write as well because the way that you write is something that just... can't be learned, you know? You have to kind of be born with it. Every time I read anything of yours, I wonder why I even write stories because your writing makes mine look like it was written by a two year old.

Also wanted to say you're my favorite author on this site (as if that wasn't already obvious) and yeah I hope this review wasn't too awkward/stalkerish because now that I think about it it probably is. BUT THAT'S WHAT YOU HAVE TO PUT UP WITH WHEN YOU WRITE GOLD, WOMAN!

Okay I'm shutting up now :)
-Rebecca

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