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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Awwh.. Poor Lily "/ Pinning after Severus. I really like what you've done with Sirius, his personallity is just so different it's so intersting to read. I like how your showing her 'decent' into the Dark Arts with asking Sev to get her books, and Sirius inviting her to join Voldemort, I really love the plot here :)

It's cool how Frank sort of took James' spot, and Severus sort of got a mix of James and Remus. This is such a brilliant idea, I really love this story so far :) Great work!

Author's Response: Poor Lily indeed -- I wanted to generate a good mix of pity and disdain for her, in order to try to approximate what I think JKR wanted to do with Severus in canon. It was tough for me to get her to fit into this mold, though, considering how warm and positive she seemed to be in canon. I'm happy that you liked how I showed her getting into the Dark Arts and how Sirius is a catalyst for all that.

Your reviews have been wonderful, especially since they were "random", which are the kind of reviews I love best. I really appreciate you taking the time to read the story and comment as you go. I'm so excited to see what you think of the plot to come -- I look forward to reading those reviews, and I sincerely hope that you enjoy it! :)

Amanda

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