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Review:explosion says:
I still can't get over how well-written this story is. I really love it so so much, and the flow is just outstanding.

That being said, this chapter did frustrate me, because you know as a team Jet fan, Aria gets back with him and I'm made incredibly happy, only to have it all yanked away from me. WHY DID ALEX HAVE TO RUIN EVERYTHING? Although I really feel terrible for Jet. He's like the most amazing original character ever and his best friend/girlfriend betrayed him in the worst way. So in all honesty I don't really think Aria deserves him, or anyone at this point. Because, while James is also a terrible friend, he's still too good for Aria.

But since this is James/OC it's sad that they will end up together, because you know, I love Jet more and it seems he's just really getting screwed in this story.

Anyways, I love this story so much and it is slowly creeping its way higher and higher on my favorites list! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)
-Rebecca

Author's Response: Oh, wow! Thank you so much! That's such an incredibly wonderful compliment for me as a writer :)

Let me tell you, this chapter frustrated me as well. I'm sorry about the false hope :( ALEX IS A JERK AND HE IS A HORRIBLE PERSON. That's why. Seriously though, it's because he doesn't like it when he doesn't get what he wants. He's vindictive and manipulative and he knew that pulling that little number was the thing that would hurt Aria AND James the most. Gosh, I love Jett to pieces. If he was real I would marry him in a heartbeat. He did get really screwed over in the worst possible way and I agree that she does not deserve him. He is far too good a person for her, or anyone really. But hopefully Aria will be able to redeem herself in the coming chapters :)

I know things are really bad for Jett now, but I promise it will get better. I love him too much to let him have a sad ending.

I WILL REACH THE TOP OF YOUR LIST. I WILL DO IT. CHALLENGE ACCEPTED. Haha, anyway, thank you so much for the wonderful review :D

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