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Review:Snapdragons says:
This was beautiful! I enjoyed the repetition in it - it wasn't too much that it was annoying, but just right. (I saw it was written for the Repetition Challenge)

I have a soft spot for stories about the war and the Order members' lives, and I think you did an excellent job portraying the difficulty of what they had to do, and the feeling of futility. She had no expectation of winning this fight. She stayed in it because she needed to be able to live with herself. I thought that was a perfect explanation.

You had so many gorgeous lines and themes here - from the idea of Marlene living on borrowed time, almost being pushed off balance going up the hill, how she wanted to think that the snow would prevent the Death Eaters from coming.

The attention to detail was also incredible - it was small things, like "the back of her hands would probably have cracked open again" and how a house could only take so much magic that seemed to really add something more to the story.

You also did a great job with Marlene and Gideon's relationship - it's sweet and believable and not over-the-top. It really was quite sweet. :)

This story was so well done - it flowed nicely, no grammar mistakes that I noticed, excellent imagery and description... truly an excellent job! I really liked this. ^-^

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) This is probably one of my favourite stories I've written, to be honest - writing it just felt so natural, especially since I did it while it was really bitter cold outside where I am (though no blizzard). A lot of the things you pointed out really made me happy, because those were things that I was hoping someone would see and say, "Oh, wow, I like that a lot!"

Thank you so much for coming over and reviewing - this is really a lovely review, and it really makes my day. :)


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