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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I really loved your descriptive writing of the explosion, I had a brilliant picture in my head with every sentance I read. I loved how, even in the midst of the explosion, Albus and Scorpius couldn't put their bickering aside (:

I think the end part, where both of them just had to try to get the last word in, was my favorite part of this chapter. They both just had to get the last word in, didn't they? (: I really love Albus, his wit is fantastic through every chapter, even in the middle of a bomb going off. The little part about not wanting to listen to the "mushy romance" of the phone call was really funny! Brilliant work, I'm really enjoying this story!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you! It's great that the explosion scene worked out so well - I wasn't sure how to work such a serious moment into a humourous story, so it means a lot to hear that Albus's description was appropriately vivid. ^_^

Haha, they're ridiculously immature, which is what makes writing them together this much fun. Though it's sad that I've been in verbal battles like that before, each person trying to slip in that final statement. XD

Thank you again for your wonderful review! It means a lot that you're enjoying the story so far!

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