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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I just loved every bit of this (: Malfoy's sarcasm with Albus' wit, the dilogue in this is just so brilliant. I love how Scorpius tries so hard to act all high and mighty, but Albus just brings him back down to the second-in-command he is every time.

I liked the reason they're watching (Viktor Krum, correct?) his girlfriend, It'll be really intersting to see what turns out from that; I love a good mystery story, and combined with the sarcastic humor, this is just too brilliant of a story. Keep it up, I loved this (:

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! It's wonderful that you enjoyed the dialogue - I've always wanted to work with that kind of fast-paced witty dialogue, but since dialogue used to be a big weakness of mine, I've tended to balk at it. It's a key part of this story, though, and I'm really glad that you like it! ^_^

It could be Krum - I certainly had him in mind at the time, though I'm not 100% certain I want to use him in this kind of role. Once he actually appears in the story, I'll be able to figure out how I want to depict that character.

Gosh, your compliments are really uplifting! :O I don't know what else to say but thank you, thank you! *glomps* These reviews have made my day!


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