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Review:Moonyxluna says:
I really loved this (: Sort of off topic to begin with, but the banner for this story is really amazing, great work!

I loved Albus' personallity, and his general feelings toward Scorpius were very funny to read. This is such a neat idea, and I got a really great sense of the plot, characters and tensions between the pair right off the bat. I really enjoyed your descriptive writing, as well as the witty dialogue from both Albus and Scorpius. It was very funny!

I suppose Scorpiuc becoming an Auror would be the ultimate insult to Draco or Lucuis, wouldn't it? (: The way you wrote this just instantly hooked me into the story, and the 'mystery' part of it makes me want to know more right away. Great job, very wonderful start.

Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, you reviewed every chapter! :O That's awesome to see, and I'm very thankful that you took the time to do so - it'll be great to read through your reactions to each part.

The banner is thanks to Gina, the graphics wiz - her ability to do that style is way beyond me, and she's as happy to populate my author page with her banners as I am to receive them. :D

It's great that you've enjoyed this first chapter, especially the two characters. It's very different to write them in this way, not only from Albus's point of view, but also in this atmosphere and genre - keeping up with the humour and witty dialogue is quite a challenge! The two of them are fun to write, though, because they play off another so easily - they've got enough in common (not that they'd ever admit it!) and enough tension between them to make for a prefect combination.

Scorpius becoming an Auror would be a blow, especially for Lucius - I'm not as sure about Draco, though, as he might see it as a way for the family name to rise again in society's regard. But I haven't quite explored Scorpius's reasons in detail yet, and I'd like to make them more complicated than simple adolescent rebellion - something that gives him as a character more depth, because right now, I'm still not understanding him as well as I'd like.

Anyway, thank you again for reading and reviewing this story! :D


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