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Review:academica says:
Hey! Review tag brought me here :)

I really, really loved this. I think it's a unique take on the Lucius/Narcissa relationship and the idea of them having an arranged marriage. I wouldn't have guessed that he was the man with whom she was having an illicit teenage affair, nor did I realize that he would, in a wonderful twist, be the man her parents chose for her in the end. Their relationship is painted as being loving and tender, and I really like that.

Your imagery is very beautiful. I really like how in the beginning you described Narcissa as looking older than she really is, because that's how I've always seen her as well. I also liked how you described Lucius's voice as sounding like honey being poured from a jar, because it's quite fitting! The story flows well and I didn't catch any errors, which is great.

Wonderful work! :)

Amanda

Author's Response: Awww, thanks so much dear! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Haha, I'm glad the ending surprised you! I really don't know where the plunny for this came from... it just attacked me one day! I'm glad it did, though; thus far it seems to be working out very well!

Aww, thank you so much for your compliments about the imagery and flow! *Tears* I owe the bit about the errors to my wonderful Beta - I would seriously be lost without her!

Thanks again, dear! Your review made my night!

~Jayde


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