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Review:StarryLaura says:
Wow...for the sake of this story, I'm going to say, I'm at a loss for words. ;)

But disregarding that, I think this story was very unique. Although not the best one-shot I've read out there, it's definitely one of the better ones. I like how there's no dialogue in the story. It changes the atmosphere a bit, shifts it into calmer, yet tenser territory. Describing the time spent staring at each other was effective.

The line where you Hermione felt him staring and knew he was staring because it was equal to her own time spent staring at him...speechless. Your snapshot of this relationship feels so slow-moving (because of the lengthy, descriptive, deep paragraphs), and at the same time, it's so real. Especially the scene where Hermione decided to sit at Draco's desk, since he had been gone for so long...

I think the kiss could have been avoided, it didn't add that much to the story...Nevertheless, it was a nice touch and the ending is perfect. It's so dark, but also promises more for their relationship. :)

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