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Review:Chocolate_Frog says:
Hello, this is Chocolate_Frog from the forums with your review request! :)

I have to say, I really liked your summary and your idea for this story. It's a nice way to sort of throw Remus and Tonks together; so I think you did really well for your first official 'ship'.

Your depiction of the Order meeting was exactly how I imagined it would be. I really like how you in-character everyone seemed to be--Dumbledore with his wise intellignece, Snape with his sneering superiority, Kingsley with his amusement and Moddy with his over-protectiveness... you pulled them all off really well.

I also liked the amount of insight you added. This line (What could possibly keep a man so focussed and determined to fight for a society that would prefer it if he was dead?), in particular, gave me a lot to think about, and would be interesting to read as the story progresses.

The bit about the Tonks's stalker was pretty funny but seemed a bit childish--I don't see why the older adults would particularly care, but your call. It does provide some amusement in the serious matters, though.

I'm really curious to read more about your Tonks and Remus (seperately, as well as together) since you have them really well characterized.

I found a few grammar mistakes/errors in this, but they were pretty minor. I suggest a quick edit to scan for mistakes. :)

Overall, it was a great story. I am looking forward to your next review request! ^^

~Chocolate_Frog

Author's Response: Thank you :)
Yey - the summary! For some odd reason I found it especially difficult for this story! :P

The Order Meeting. Thanks! :D With Vincent, I just felt that it offered them something to smile about. As they are at war and admidst all the deaths everyone is looking for something to smile at. Hence Vincent :)

I'll do another scan through for any mistakes. Thank you so much for the review :)

Keira :)



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