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Review:KatnissMalfoy says:
Okay, hi! :)

I thought it was very good! At times, it got a little boring, but overall, good! I don't need to say much more except "Alright, mate" should be "Alright, mate." Um characterisation was good, I thought it was generally interesting but a bit long and windy. Honestly, the pace is a bit slow, but I am here to offer contructive critiscm and that's what I found! :)

8/10

Author's Response: Hi, there. Thanks for taking some time to read my little pet project.

I appreciate all of your constructive criticism. The story definitely wound up being longer than I'd planned. I'm kind of a sucker for technical writing and courtroom drama type stuff, so I'm sure I could have shortened that part and most people would have been pleased. Se la vi.

Thanks for the review!


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