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Review:LunarLuna says:
The way you portrayed Petunia is precisely why I like this fic so much. Many people make her all sweet and sad and hiding her emotions. I never imagined her that way. Not heartless but... bitter, and a little desperate. You gave her that exact feel. I liked the cleaning anlogy, it wasa interesting and seemed to fit her story to the core.

I swear I had shivers down my spine at "Can you imagine somebody without a soul?" it's a simple phrase, what made it so powerful was... the placement? I don't know how to explain it...

The only critism I found was that Muriel had way too many people caring enough to go go check on her xD

Seriously tough, it was really a great One-Shot, you can sense the work and effort you put behind it. Good job!

-June

Author's Response: Hi there! I haven't forgotten about your review, I'd just gone to bed before I got your reply and wasn't sure if we're still on. I'll drop by and leave it for you tomorrow!

I loved writing Petunia so much for this, it was just sooo fun. I wanted to turn it into a longer story, but... I'm not allowed. Too many WIPS.

In my head Muriel more or less bullied people into visiting, but I guess that wasn't very clear. Ahha. I may edit another line in about that.

Thanks for the lovely review! :)

-AC

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