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Review:charlottetrips says:
Hi ‘Claw!

Here’s my only criticism – some things not capitalized – “muggles” & “charms” in the beginning.

“Land of Heartthrob” – *presses “Like” button furiously*

Look at Sirius, using his smexy manliness to render girls dumb, but go Eleanor! Rally yourself together! Ignore the soft silky hair, the beautiful expressive eyes! It’s not worth it!

LOL – Sirius’ pockets are basically trash bins.

♥ so much Sirius having a blank expression on something so obvious (why Poppy would be out to get Eleanor).

My running review stopped because I got distracted by the hilarious antics of everyone involved! Adorable, simply adorable! But dear, a turnip! Ouch! I love how it’s friends that can do this to friends and get away with it…almost :P

xChar

Author's Response: Hi there!

Yes, thankyou for mentioning it - I should go back and edit :P...(later)

Haha, thankyou! I loved writing Sirius like that, he doesn't know what he's doing ;) Hehe, I felt sorry for Eleanor as I wrote her - it was difficult not to give in. Ahh these characters, what will we do with them, eh?

Hehe, I that's what I thought they'd be like :D

Thankyou so much! I'm glad you liked it, it was a lot of fun to write, and I'm glad it made sense! Yes, only friends can get away with it :P

~TGK

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