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Review:Keira7794 says:
Hello :)

Just reviewing for the 'Harry's Missing Year' Challenge - sorry for the delay, I extended the deadline because of the queue closure and then RL got in the way. But anyway, the chapter!

I really liked this chapter; I love how you've portrayed Padma as an adult and working with the Dragons. I really enjoyed how much detail you put into the dragons and how much research you've done on the different breeds (I'm not sure whether you created the breeds or you've read J.K's Beat book - which I'm desperate to read!).

Padma's characterisation is brilliant; we don't really learn much about her at Hogwarts except the assumptions that she is intelligent and probably brave due to her twin sister being a Gryffindor. This really came across well and I liked her hesitantsy (I don't really think that's a word.. but oh well!) at approaching the dragon due to not being completely sure about the dosage of sleeping potion.

It was the small details like how different dragons have different dosages of potion, and how people are trying to figure it out, and then also the pro's and con's of a stunning spell, that made this really realistic for me. Padma's interaction with her co-workers was believable (loved the Ravenclaw domination as I feel that this would have happened in many places!) and I like the easy joking going in between them.

It's understadable why Padma would prefer to be outside rather than in the ministry and I really liked how she was married to Dean whilst Parvati was with Seamus.

We both know that I'm not brilliant with grammar, so I'm not going to even try what I'm sure is amazing anyway. The only thing that I saw was that you've forgotten to put a full stop (or period) at the end of the first paragraph. But that's all really :)

I would be very interested in a story about Drag
on Pox, as even though you only mentioned it a couple times, by brain was going 'oooh? What's this?' and looking for more clues. You've really left this open so you can carry on if you wanted to and I really enjoyed it!

Brilliant entry!

Keira7794

Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad you liked it!

Some of the dragon breeds I got out of Fantastic Beasts, and others I created. :) I'm really glad you liked all the details - I'm really starting to consider writing a dragon pox fic, because I got really into just the little bit in this story. :)

Thank you so much for your review, and I'm really glad you enjoyed my entry!

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