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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
I'm here with your review!

It's always interesting to find out more about the Patil twins, especillay Padma since I'm pretty sure the Yule Ball is the only scene in the books/movies she even has any lines in. I kind of like the idea of Seamus and Dean ending up with the twins, it lets them become related to each other the same as Harry and Ron.

I enjoyed the descriptions in the beginning, we could get a real sense of the danger presented by the dragon, and there was a shroud of mystery around the dragon pox that would definetely make for an interesting story if you chose to write more about it. Overall I just enjoy how much detail you've put into these various ministry departments, rather than just showing everybody have the same jobs.

I didn't see any problems with the flow, and I did not find it confusing. There was a build up of suspense as we wondered what the letter was about, and then it ended up being a huge let down at the end, which I'm sure is what you were going for. I wonder if they will go with a traditional Indian name or something more western.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad you like the idea of the twins ending up with Seamus and Dean - I was afraid that some people might find that annoying. (Well, some people might... but I'm glad that you're not one of them! :P)

Thank you so much for the review. That's definitely exactly how I wanted it to come across, and I'm feeling a little more confident that that's how it did come across now. :)


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