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Review:Indigo Seas says:
I am SO sorry I didn't review this sooner, as I promised, and I feel like I'm a few (read: five or six) months too late, but Susan, let me just tell you right now that that was absolutely breathtaking.

And not really in the obvious way, either. The feeling sort of creeps up on you, when you're reading through the text, and suddenly there's this overwhelming aura of... "This is gorgeous. This is really, really gorgeous." And then you finish and look at the screen, and blink a few times, and still continue to say, "that was gorgeous."

I did, at least. If you replace the "you" in the above paragraph with "Rin," it may make more sense. :P

I love your diction. Well, I loved everything about this, but mostly the diction. Diction and syntax. I'm kind of a sucker for writers with strong holds on style, and my gosh, Susan, you absolutely do. The story will ebb and flow flawlessly, and you'll throw in little interrupters that make the reader pause for the briefest of seconds (in a wonderful sort of way).

Gorgeous. Can I just say that again? Gorgeous.

x Rin

Author's Response: It means a lot that you are able to read and review this story! Don't apologize because things do come up, and I've been guilty of not getting to reviewing the stories for challenges I've made, so it'd be awful of me to bother anyone else about it. I enjoyed being able to write a story like this, and your prompt was the bump in the right direction that I needed. For that I'm most thankful. ^_^

*blushes* Wow, I don't know how to reply to your comments - they're just so... squee-ful. I'm super happy to hear that the story read like that and affected you in such a powerful way - there's really nothing else I could have asked for. It was a moving story to write, and while, when re-reading it, I do see a few nit-picky edits I ought to make, the fact that you see it as "gorgeous" is just. really. really. amazing. Thank you! *big huggleglomp*

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