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Review:Another Secret Santa! says:
Hi, your secret santa here and I'm back with another review! Firstly, I love the idea of this and I can say that I'm looking forward to see where you go with this. It was a little hard to follow as there were a lot of time periods being thrown in at once. Maybe you could have just started a new paragraph and in one of the opening sentences explained the time period, but made sure it still made the chapter flow.

However the dialogue is overall realistic and people were generally in character. Just a few tips, snogger.haha is that a word. I don't know if you're british or not but I am and I've never said it in my life. It did add a lot to the humour though, which I did like.

9/10
Secret Santa :)

Author's Response: lol I have no idea if it's a real word, that could have been a typo or me just being weird. I'm really glad you liked the dialogue!
It is a pretty strange way to enter different time periods, but I was trying to do a flashback or something so maybe I'll work on that when I can.

Thanks!


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