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Review:Pixileanin says:
Can't hurt...

This chapter is truly incredible. The flow of the action, the juxtaposed feelings, both internally and externally of the characters, and of course the imagery. It's a beautiful thing when all that comes together. Such an amazing scene with the swirling and the music and the swell of emotions and Lucy's fight to push her past away. And I couldn't help thinking that this time when they ran away, it wasn't fun and games, but a real threat they were running from.

Really, really excellent!

Author's Response: Oh, my, you liked my angsty fluff. Hooray! I worked particularly hard on the imagery in this one and really tried to slow down each moment, particularly the pivotal "can't hurt" sequence. I've tried very hard to write true, complex emotions here, the kind of tangled mess that people who were separated for years and then thrown back together would be forced to weather one day at a time.

Your reviews are super sweet! Thanks! :)

Amanda


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