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Review:Pixileanin says:
I wonder if Sirius' pancakes were really any good, or if Lucy was just trying to make him feel better. I'm not sure what kind of cooking skills one would have after being in Azkaban for as long as he had, but you never know. ;)

I'm sure that Sirius might have been one of the only people Lucy would have eaten an entire pancake for, regardless of the taste, so good on him. You've kept him so well in character throughout this story so far. Reckless, impulsive, and all the other stuff. Almost like he is reaching for control of something himself, and decides that he needs to help the person who might be in the same or worse condition that himself.

Author's Response: Hah, good point! I don't see Sirius as much of a domestic type anyway, and a more adept cook might have realized that pancakes would be kind of a heavy dish for an anorexia patient to try.

Oh, yay! I really like Sirius, but I feel like it's way too easy to let him stray into cliche-land, so I sometimes feel like I avoid him. I prefer writing, say, Remus or Severus (obviously) because the gray is readily apparent there. But Sirius has his own gray, I think, and it needs to be explored, for sure. Again, you've said it well -- he's a selfish man, living at his own will, but he's also got a caring side, as seen in canon with Harry.

Thanks again for your review! :)

Amanda


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