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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Ah! Interesting prologue. I love stories about the Black sisters. Usually the one's I read are when they're in Hogwarts or around that time. It's different to read one about them after the war. Good different.

There's only one thing I noticed: "In was almost a week before Andromeda remembered the letter again."

I assume it's meant to be "It was almost a week..."

Other than that, it's perfect. The broken relationship between the sisters that we can see now has me think; will they ever be sisters again? Will Andi see her as she's the only family she has, as well as Teddy?

I look forward to finding out how were you take this story.

Sam.

Author's Response: Oops, yes. Definitely "it." Thanks for pointing it out. There's always one typo that seems to slip through...

I love stories about the Black sisters, too. It's just such an interesting dynamic, and it was so unexplored in the books that there are so many different ways you can run with it. I'm glad you like my take so far. :)

Thank you so much for your review!


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