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Review:Akussa says:
Hi again!

Oh that was such a lovely story, I enjoyed reading it a lot! This last chapter was a very nice conclusion as well. All the detailing gave this story a very fresh feel and an original one at that.
I really like the way you created Fleur, she was warm and ambitious; a nice addition to the Weasley family! I like how you brought together the entire family but didn't feel the need to put the emphasis on them (eg. 'The Potters and Ron and Hermione arrived with a bunch of children'; no need to name them all; they are present but they aren't the center of the story.). Authors usually feel the need to name all the rpesent character and have them all say something to prove that their presence adds to the story but usually, it only makes the story heavier and distracts from the center plot. You did a great job in keeping it simple and light.

Great work, I really had a great time reading this light hearted little story.

Author's Response: Fresh and original, what a compliment! That's exactly what I was going for with this, so that's great :)

Yeah, the Weasley family and their relatives were really the backdrop of this story, whereas the "love triangle" (as Fleur envisioned it in her mind) was more of the main focus. I wanted it to be kind of fluffy and light, so it's good to hear that it came out that way for you.

I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks again for all of your kind reviews! :)

academica


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