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Review:Akussa says:
Hi again!

See, I told you I'd be back! I just want to start by saying that, in response to the previous review, I was not offended at all and I'm sorry if this is how my review sounded. It was all in good laugh and the expression I used, talking like you have a warm potato in your mouth, is one my english teacher used to tell us all the time to suggest we were not prononciating enough.

As for this chapter, I loved it as well. I really enjoyed the flashback to the Ball, it was very well done and followed cannon perfectly. I really liked Fleur's relfexions, when she wondered if she created the illusion of being a superficial person.

I laughed so much imagining her putting all sorts of alarms next to her bed to make sure she'd wake up! That is so like me to do that...

It was a really good chapter, flowed nicely and was a nice continuity to the previous one. Great job!

Author's Response: Hey! It's good to know you weren't offended, and I appreciate you taking the time to finish reading this story.

I had fun writing Fleur's thoughts about herself and her interaction with Roger. I'm very happy to know that it followed canon, because I try to stick to canon as much as I can :)

Thanks for your kind review!

academica


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