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Review:Cassius Alcinder says:
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This story was basically a perfect compliment to the first half, showing both the contrasts and the similarities between Hermione and Ginny as they faced different challenges in different ways, but had the same allagiances and cared about the same people.

You did a really good job with Hermione's characterization. We can see the intelligent bookish girl that we know from the books, but there was also always hints of a layer of insecurities beneath her outer confidence, which is portrayed very well here. We can see the pressures and expectations she feels being the one that must come up with all the plans for Harry and Ron. We can also see the sheer enormity of the challenge hey were facing as they searched for horcruxes, not really knowing where to look.

Finally, as a Ron/Hermione loyalist, I loved how you protrayed their relationship. We can see how neither of them were outwardly the most popular, but they saw things in each other that other people wouldn't have after how much time they spent togther.

Great job!

Author's Response: Oh, hooray, the contrast was evident! Excellent. That's precisely what I had hoped for.

Yes, I did want to take Hermione a bit deeper, as I try to do with all of the characters I write. I did want her to seem like she was overwhelmed and felt the pressure of always being the one with the plan. Despite being "the brightest witch of her age", she's still just a seventeen-year-old girl, you know?

I'm glad you liked the Ronmione, too :) I've never written them before, but I do think their relationship is pretty cute, and I cheered as loudly as anybody else when they finally kissed in DH :)

Thanks for another very kind review! I always love them! :)

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