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Review:The Last Marauder says:
I just love the symmetry of this story; how the titles are so similiar, how each chapter has EXACTLY the same number of words (I presume that was deliberate?), how each tells what both girls are thinking at exactly the same time on exactly the same date. Brilliant.

I thought you characterised Hermione really well. The girl we read about here is Hermione, pure and simple, you got her spot on; she is the bookish school-girl, the best friend of Harry, the something more than a friend to Ron and the brains of every operation. Here, we also see both her feelings towards Harry and her feelings towards Ron. You capture how she feels at this exact moment of time so well. Again, you convey so much emotion with the words you use, which is such a great skill to have.

I don't know what else to say that won't be repeating what I said in the previous review. This is just a great story, that's all I can say, perfectly written, very emotional and just brilliant. Well done.

Author's Response: The word count was actually not deliberate! It showed up differently in my word processor, but hey, I'm not going to argue with it. It definitely works for the symmetrical nature of the story. The similar titles and dates were, of course, done on purpose :)

I'm glad that Hermione worked as well as Ginny. That was one of my goals, both of them being mostly unfamiliar territory for me. I did try to paint a picture of her practical nature while still allowing her to process her feelings about the war and her companions, particularly the one she ultimately ends up marrying.

Thanks for both of your kind reviews! I really do appreciate you taking the time to come by, and I'll probably be by again to request for other stories in the future :)

academica


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