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Review:Secret Santa! says:
Hey! :waves:
Just wanted to give you your first christmas present! It's a review in the shape of George's wand!

I really like the idea of this story with Angelina relating the image of fireworks from a sad event to a really happy one. I think you've incorporated the song 'Mr Brightside' so well into the story with it being such an upbeat song into the story! The way Fred told Angelina that he was leaving really was quite cute because it gave her something which helped her get through the funeral because of the fireworks.

I also love how Angelina couldn't stay mad with Fred even though he had just left them it was lovely. The way you made Angelina start talking to George at the funeral was interesting because she still seems to be in love with Fred so they're helping each other through it which is really nice.

George's reaction seems to be quite believable as I can't see him slipping into depression and I hoped he just wanted to carry on with his shop as that's just how the Weasley spirit was!

Well done on this!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It means a lot that you liked all those things, they were really important for me and what I wanted to describe in the story :D

ooo pretty wand :)
Waves. POW! another review appears ...(eventually lol)

Thanks so much!

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