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Review:Secret Santa says:
Fourth year:

God, I couldn't keep the smile off my face while I was reading that section. I LOVED the interaction with Scorpius and the Weasley family, especially Rose. And you know what I love most about it? You can tell that it's not really that malicious or evil. It's more mockery and that's what I like about it.

I'm not overly tense while reading it and it just makes me smile. Not that it's funny or anything, but you write it so well. I could easily see them taunting each other for the next few hours and I wouldn't get bored.

Can I say that I also love how reasonable Noah is in this? He is so like the voice of reason and he's just so calm. I love him. And he balances Scorpius out well. They seem like such good friends on top of just being cousins and their relationship works well. (I also totally approve of Noah reading The Hunger Games!)

I LOVED how he led Scorpius at the end of this section with his questions and observations. He's so all-knowing but in a teenage-guy way and it just made me smile so much.

Your strength is the way you have people in character and they way they interact with people around them. You do it so effortlessly. I am jealous. :P

Fifth year
SCORPIUS AND ROSE SITTING IN A TREE K-I-S...

Yeah, okay. I won't be that immature. Especially since Scorpius is so mature in this. But, EEK INSERT FANGIRL SQUEE, he is finally in tune with his feelings. Good God, it took him long enough!

He finds her attractive. Of course he does! And now he's admitting it and, ugh, it's just so awesome. Seriously, I am sitting here like an idiot right now and just... yeah. I have to read on more because this is just so much fun to read.

Oh Gawwwd, Scorpius, denial is the last thing you want. You don't want to deny it. Give in to it! *sing song voice* You know you want to!

Okay. Wow. I had way too much fun reviewing this. And a huge part of it was that this was just so much damn fun to read! I've never reviewed as I read and it was an experience. A fun one!

I'm not too sure how much sense my reviews make (there goes my brilliant idea for using the sections for structure, ha) but hopefully you have picked up on the underlying fact that I absolutely adore this. And I kind of hate that you haven't written sixth year or seventh year because we all know what happens when people turn sixteen and seventeen. That's when the fun stuff happens! Yes, Scorpius, you are going to end up with Rose. Deal with it.

Teehee.

Please update soon!

Author's Response: The Hunger Games are absolutely amazing. I imagined Noah as being in the middle of the "oh my god, is Peeta actually going to survive the Hunger Games or not?" stage of the book, and because he doesn't understand the internet, he couldn't just google it to see what happens. :P

And oh, I've written sixth year, and some of seventh year... I'm just not posting it until I finish posting Curiosity is not a Sin. :P

I'm really glad that you enjoy the dynamic between Scorpius and the Weasley/Potter clan... I was definitely trying to avoid the deep hatred that seems to run rampant in a lot of next-gen stories, because it's just so silly and ridiculous to me!

Thank you so much for your reviews. I'm sick today, and they are really cheering me up and making me feel less awful. :)


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