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Review:Secret Santa says:
I. Love. This. Story.
It’s great to read any time of year, and I like how you made it that Scorp and Rose finally got together at Christmas, it’s such a lovely way of starting their story. I also like the way you wrote Scorpius, his attitude and his affection for Rose, not to mention the way he reacts around the rest of the Potter-Weasley Clan, One this I have against this… “And we all know there are no such things as Nargles.” Yes, I am going there… Why would you say such blasphemy! Nargles are so real, every one knows that. :)

Well I think that is basically telling you I had nothing against this story… (unless you count the Nargles) It had a great flow, a lovely atmosphere and showed more of that style of writing that you are best at. This is defiantly one of your best (that’s not because it’s a Rose/Scorp cause I like Lily II better) It’s cause you made this Rose/Scorp really enjoyable to read.
One thing I have to say to improve the flow, like I said in one of the other reviews is about the “” thing in this sentence for example;
““Yeah, I’m fine.” If your definition of fine is “still tremendously embarrassed, possibly emotionally scarred, and on the brink of insanity”, then yes, I’m fine. I’m perfectly fine. Why do you ask?” It really confuses you at first, I had to read it twice to understand that he wasn’t saying it out loud. So just watch that for future reference.
Otherwise I loved it, it was beautiful and the perfect Christmas story. Well done.

-SS

Author's Response: Ahoy there! Yay, I see you have found my Christmas-in-October story. xD

If it helps any, it pained me to type those words. Such blasphemy! How could Nargles not exist? Alas, Scorpius is too narrow-minded to truly experience the world. xD

I'm really, really glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you for the tip! ^^

~Khanh

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