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Review:Livi_777 says:
Hi, this is Livi with your BvB review battle review!
Oh I really really like this story. It's one of the first really good Rose/Scorpius's I've read. For some reason the other ones all seem to have Scorpius in tears! Anyway, I really like the humour in this story, the style really suits you, and you get Scorpius bang on. He's sarcastic and funny while still proud and very much a Slytherin! Here are a few things I spotted for you to go back and edit.
'“Hurry up James! You’re going to make us late! Quit snogging your girlfriend.” Al screamed at his brother.' I don't think Al would have screamed here, I think he would have yelled or hollered. Also, Lysander Scamander pops up at one point to talk about Nargles with Rose, which doesn't really make sense, because this is a Potter-Weasley gathering. It should probably be a different Weasley who she turns to talk to.
I loved this story though, I really enjoyed reading it, it was funny but it had plenty of plot and I don't think you rushed into the kiss too much, which is always good! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Hmm, I will go back and fix that detail. As for the Lysander one, it was orginally supposed to be a Wotter-and-friends gathering, but since I never mentioned that I suppose it doesn't make any sense. xD

Thanks agian for your review and for spotting those! :)

~Khanh

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