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Review:megaaan says:
Another lovely chapter! I love her hatred of Divination that kept cropping up, and the short conversation she had with Jane's parents, however I'm not as sure on the part where you said she didn't feel the need for necessities, when talking about Francesca's parents.

I really enjoyed the references to Riddle; showing that he seemed perhaps attractive and nice, which is completely unlike the Riddle we know. The talk about Minerva flying unnerved me at first - I thought it was a mistake or a typo, but obviously not! Personally I can't ever imagine her on a broom, let alone being on the Quidditch team - but I'm looking forward to seeing how it connects to the plot!

Also, I'm not sure if I agree with Francesca's comment about her never doing anything for fun: I just don't see how this could be true of anyone and Minerva McGonagall is no exception - although perhaps that's just me :P

Once again, there are a couple of spelling and grammar points, but these are small and easily fixed :-) And when you described Walter sitting next to her, you had just been talking about Nora Rabnott and I thought that you still were - it took me a while to realise it was actually Minerva. I do like Walter's character though, you developed him nicely in a short space of time.

And I love how the time period is that of the Chamber of Secrets opening the first time! Dramatic ending to a great chapter, well done! And it looks like I'll be reviewing chapter three too - 15,000; congratulations!!!

Your NaNo mummy - Megan xxx

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