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Review:megaaan says:
Hiya, here I am with your 5,000 NaNo gift ;) - I'm innocence from the forums - sorry this has taken a while!

First of all, I adore the setting and time period of this. The wars have always fascinated me (eugh that sounds like I'm a really horrible person; I'm not, honestly), and I love McGonagall so this is a really good excuse for me to read something slightly different to normal. You've written it incredibly well for the time period - the language that Minerva and the chapter in general is great, and makes me feel like it was written in that period.

I only have a couple of niggles - and they are literally just that; niggles. At times the grammar isn't perfect - although it is pretty much spot on throughout the chapter, there are one or two spots where I feel could be changed slightly. However, this is a really tiny point.

My other point is at the beginning of the chapter, when you said: "she used it as a place to practice spells and potions away from the eyes of her parents (even though she was over six months too young)." If she was too young to be able to practise magic, then how was she getting away with it without the Ministry interfering?

Once again, this was a brilliant beginning, and - NaNo mummy or not - I'm looking forward to reviewing the next couple of chapters :-) A little bunny has told me that you've reached 10,000; so it should be very soon!

Megan xo

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