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Review:Remus says:
I have a complaint...

This is just too short! I wanted to read more! Haha!

You're definitely humanized Narcissa a lot more, something we rarely see in the books. However, I'm glad you wrote her in a way that she still believes in blood status and hating muggle borns. Despite whatever happened to her and the family in the war, nothing would've changed her view of blood status. It's the environment in which she grew up in and is now her firm her belief system. People rarely never change. Specially adults.

Your writing technique when it comes to details and imagery has definitely improved when compared to the first chapter. The details you have at the beginning of the chapter with the dusty rooms was great to set the imagery for the entire chapter.

Anyway, you sort of left me hanging so I hope to see something soon!

--Perelandra

Author's Response: Aw, sorry! That definitely makes me feel happy, though - it's one of the highest compliments I can get as a writer. :)

I'm really glad that you feel like I've humanized Narcissa without whitewashing her faults - that's totally what I was aiming for, but I was afraid I wouldn't be successful. :)

Thanks for your review, and I'll try to update asap! Right now I'm waiting for my first James/Lily fic to clear validation, but then we'll see. :)


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