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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here with your review! Sorry it hast taken a while...kinda of a crazy life I've been leading lately, hahaha!

This chapter was definitely enjoyable to read!

Even though we never REALLY get to know Andromeda I like how you painted her. She definitely moved on from Ted and Dora's death but the pain is still there one way or another. Tedd alone is a constant reminder of what her crazy sister did.

The small thing though. In here you wrote "And all she had to show for that desire was the gravestone of her daughter, who was living proof that Bellatrix cared more about blood than family." Considering that Dora is dead how is that "living proof"? Honestly that's the only little thing that made me stop in my tracks for a second.

I absolutely loved the whole Narcissa/Andromeda interaction. I honestly felt horrible for Narcissa. I was cheering for her and cringed at the parts where Andromeda just totally goes off on her.

This was definitely a fantastic chapter. On for the next one!

Author's Response: The phrase "living proof" doesn't necessarily refer to someone that's alive - it just means that it's a good example of something. :)

Thank you so much for your review - I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! :)


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