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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
{I didn't review the second chapter because I thought I already did..is that okay?}

I love the way you made it Narcissa's PoV. I think it was really great seeing her thoughts for a while because not much people took over that challenge. It was also interesting to know that you didn't made Narcissa 'oh-so-soft' or one of those ex-death eaters who just went off with the good side in praise of Harry Potter. You kept basically Narcissa the way we knew her from the books (again, I say books because I prefer them than the movies...not that the movies are bad or anything)

The moving pictures added a more 'realistic' effect, and it was always an aspect that intrigued me. There was also the mention of Dobby *sob*

The flow was really great like the other chapters only this time it was Narcissa's Pov. I think it was a great improvement with using Narcissa's Pov instead of Andromeda.

Hoping to witness Draco and Astoria's wedding soon,
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Aha! That's what happened! I wasn't going crazy - you did review this before. :P

I'm glad you think that switching to Narcissa's PoV is good, and that I executed it well! I was a little worried that it would chop up the flow, but when I started to think about it, I realized how important Narcissa's side of the story is as well, and how important it is to tell it.

Thank you so much! :) I'll update as soon as I get the chance.

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