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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
I liked this chapter. I had to restart it at first, because originally I didn't catch that it was from Narcissa's pov, even thoough Narcissa is the first word in the chapter. But I really liked how you showed the relationship between Lucius and Narcissa. I especially like how you protrayed Lucius, instead of being an overbearing tyrant, he's a loving husband who simply made a few mistakes. He doesn't get mad when she interrupts him, and he doesn't like to see her upset. It's like they really are a couple, and a loving one at that, and after all these years. It's nice.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad you liked my portrayal of Narcissa's relationship with Lucius and, of course, Lucius himself! I thought a lot about how I wanted to portray them, and ended up deciding that while Harry definitely saw the more negative side of them, the glimpses we get of them indicated something much deeper than just a cold, uncaring family. I was hoping it would come across as realistic, and I'm glad it came across that way to you!

Thank you. :)


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