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Review:kalkay says:
I love this! It makes me smile and feel happy.

ok...that was very cheesy but it's true! I can't wait to read the second chapter! The french that you put in the story was perfect and not over done to the point where if you're French illiterate like me that it was still very easy to follow.

Flowed wonderfully and had a great sound to it when I read it. You captured the voices well though I think you are a strong enough writer that you could've made them stronger.

Great story! Loved it!

Trick-or-Treat!
xoxo
kalkay

Author's Response: Good! It's supposed to be a fluffy, feel-good kind of story :) I'm glad you liked what I did with the French as well. As to the voices, I kind of wish you had elaborated a little on what you mean by making them stronger. I don't quite understand and I'd like to, as I do value my reviewers' opinions! Happy that you liked the flow, though :)

Thanks for your kind review!

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