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Review:Beeezie says:
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This was terrific! I really enjoyed it! :) I especially liked your writing style - which was informal and really funny - and the fact that you made the atmosphere seem relaxed and really realistic to me. I've never been a huge fan of the crazy house rivalries that have somehow only gotten worse, or the idea that Scorpius is hated by all the Weasleys. This worked really well for me, and I liked it a lot!

There are one little thing I want to point out, though - occasionally, your tenses got a bit messed up. For example, in the second-to-last paragraph, you start in past tense, and then go on to say, "she's finally kissed me," which is present. I'd suggest that you just go through to double check your tenses. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! I hadn't even realized that--I'll definetely look back at my tenses when I go to edit it with a banner/CI! :)

~Khanh

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