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Review:Jenna822 says:
Adore this chapter. The flashback was great. At first I was gonna make some comment about setting it up as a flashback and making sure that it was obvious and what not, but then I got to thinking, you don't really need a set up there. I mean, you mention the Great Hall in the opening paragraph, so it should be more than obvious.

And the flashback was nice. I like how in-character they both seemed and how you gave us bits of insight into her mind. The way she preferred being with her sister and not caring if girls gossiped about her. Again, those are the kinds of things we saw her illustrate in the actual books, so your version of her seemed very canon. *tries to stop rambling*

Anyways, this was a great chapter as well! --Jenna

Author's Response: Hey again!

I'm pleased that you liked the flashback set-up. I thought it was important to go back to the few moments Fleur spent with Roger in canon in order to further explore her anxiety about seeing him again. I did try to keep her canon, like I mentioned, and so I'm very happy to see that I have accomplished that.

I'm so glad you liked it! One more response...

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