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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi, it is I again!

Angst. Angst. I don't know. I mean I don't review much of angst it always romance! But I have read quite a few of them to know that your story is pretty amazing.

I maybe not be an expert at angst but you did described Teddy's feelings for Victoire and his thoughts about her pretty well. Your story wasn't one of those 'oh-so confusing angst' ones that the reader can't see where the story is going or what the character/s are feeling.

Overall, I'd give you a 9 out of 10. I mean your story is pretty flawless. You made the whole story flow easily, you described the characters well enough to understand their feelings (or more like Teddy's feelings.) And even though Angst is out of your zone you did pretty well. And I certainly enjoyed it!

Keep writing more amazing stories!
CloakAuror9 xx

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you feel like it came across as believable. :) It's actually a bit odd - it's not like my life has been all sunshine and roses, but translating that into stories is definitely less natural for me than, say, romance or humor.

Thank you so much for reviewing, and for your very kind words! :)


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