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Review:apocalypse says:
EH!! You were right when you said angst isn't really your thing - this was lovely! So, so adorable, and I loveloveLOVE how Teddy proposed and all the minor characters! :D

Now then, your concerns...

Characterization: It was terrific! Victoire was very, very well-done as Bill and Fleur's daughter and Teddy was spectacular; the perfect boyfriend! Also, like I've said before, I really do like the minor characters like Enid!

Description: This, right here, was actually my favourite part of the story. The whole thing is described very well and I love the interesting little quirks you've inserted, like the charmed bakery items and Teddy's weird safety concerns. Me gusta. :D

Flow: In a word - BRILLIANT.

Just a point to add though: you should go over your stories with a fine-toothed comb after writing to avoid some minor grammatical and spelling errors that do occur. E.g. you've written 'since he’d moving out' in one place which I realise happens unintentionally sometimes when your thought process is speeding, but it's minor errors like that which keep your work from perfection.

Overall, it was spectacular and I loved it! :D

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm especially glad you liked the safety concerns and bakery items and stuff - I was afraid that people would say that it's too much of a distraction from the story or something. So glad that you don't think it was!

And think you for pointing out the typo! I always read through multiple times, but somehow I always manage to miss at least one typo. Blegh. :P

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