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Review:in_love_with_HP says:
1) (:D) it was nice that Wyatt sat by Roxy, I think Coco should have asked her to sit with them.

2) It's understandable why Coco doesn't want to sit in the Great Hall, but it would be brave to go and show people that she doesn't care what they think, but maybe it cuts too deep.

3) Why does Coco asume that McGonagall hates her!? she just wanted to be friendly and comforting, not nosy. She could actually do something about it, contrary to Corinne's belief.

4) Chaise is allowed to be mates with the Quidditch team, despite Coco's bad memories. He's the one who has to play with them and getting along and trusting each other is important. So, a bit of an overreaction, I think.

Now, after that rant, I'm just waiting for the next chapter :D obviously hearting it :)

Author's Response: 1.) I loved Wyatt sitting by Roxy too! I saw it as a knight in shining armor type of situation, but that's just me. Coco should've asked her to sit with them, but she's so confused that she doesn't know how to act. Are they friends? are they not? It's one big mass of confusion for her.

2.) Coco is very concerned with what people think of her. Its been like that her whole life, so it's going to be a hard habit for her to break through this story. But I'll try to make her sit in the Great Hall soon.

3.) Corinne assumes McGonagall hates her because Corinne is stupid and assumes things. Although I do have to say that in my experiences some teachers just cant do anything for you.

4.) Yes Corinne is an overreacting person. So am I, which is probably why I write Corinne overreacting so much. I write Corinne with reactions I would have. But I do think it's kind of a slap in the face for one of her best friends to be chummy with the person that made her life so awful.

I'm glad you liked the chapter and I'll try and update this Friday! Thank you :)
-Rebecca


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