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Review:magnolia_magic says:
Hi! magnolia_magic here with your requested review :)

This chapter is beautifully written, and it's such a sweet, enjoyable read. I love your Fleur: like Bill said, she seems very gracious, but very competitive as well. But even without this line from Bill, you do a really good job of showing the reader who Fleur is. So, great job on that :)

I love Fleur's reaction when she hears Roger is the new intern: eating the muffin without even thinking about it. It seemed like a very Fleur thing to do in that situation. Since she seems so composed and put-together up until that point, I had to laugh when she got flustered :)

This was such a cute read, and I'm excited to go on! Thanks so much for requesting! :)

--Maggie

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for your lovely review! :)

I'm so happy you found it sweet and enjoyable. This is my first time writing Fleur, and I'm pleased to see that she came across pretty much exactly as I intended her to! I'm glad you liked her reaction as well; I had a funny visual image of her just stuffing the thing in her mouth. She was quite flustered!

Thanks again. So glad you're liking it! :)

academica


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