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Review:Noblevyne says:
I don't think I've ever seen a better submission for this particular challenge. There's a whole story here, a beginning, middle and an end - and it was just so touching and so beautiful.

This little moment in time with her little boy - everyone else seems to focus on her relationship with Rose but here you have drawn a very realistic and loving relationship in just 500 words - marvellous! I love the suggestion that Hugo is her favourite, because he is the both of them so combined, a reminder of their union and all the parts of them that fit.

Such beautiful imagery too - the warm descriptions give this piece an air of familiarity and fondness. Every word very carefully chosen, though you manage to make it look so easy and flowing.

Author's Response: Wow, that's quite a compliment! Thank you :)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! It's really hard for me to write things with a sparse word count--I've heard people call very long chapters/paragraphs after my name, which is a compliment but at the same time goes to show that this is a branch away from my M.O., so to speak :D

I like Rose, but my own conceptualization of Hugo makes me believe that Hermione would be drawn to him; I picture Rose as more of a Hermione mini-me and Hugo as a healthy balance of his parents and families. He's very innocent in my mind; I think that because Hermione was robbed an innocent adolescence, she'd prize it very much in her son. As well as the way that he is the symbol of the unity of her husband and herself.

I tried consciously to focus on color and space in this fic--so glad it came across and wasn't overloady :D

Thank you so much for your kind, kind review! I really appreciate it :)

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