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Review:Logamind says:
Hi it's Logamind from the forums here.

This is a great story. You're descriptions were perfect, the amount of detail you went into when describing everything was truly beautiful. It really helped me picture to story you were telling.

Hugo's going to Hogwarts right? At first I was wondering why Hermione was so upset (which you've described wonderfully by the way) and then when I reread it I realised it was late August so Hugos departure to Hogwarts seemed like the most likely reason. Do correct me if i'm totally off the ball there!

The way you've described Hermiones emotions in this is genius. I really felt her pain, it was just extremely well written.

Brilliant story and written so beautifully!

Logamind

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the quick review! I'm never that prompt :(

I'm so glad you enjoyed this! And you're right, Hugo's going off to Hogwarts. Specifically this is the night before he leaves, but with only 500 words, it didn't seem as important to say that in light of making Hermione's emotions apparent!

Also this was my first -serious- attempt at writing Hermione, and my very first as /mother/ Hermione, so I'm glad that it didn't appear OCC or anything.

Thanks so much for your review, I appreciate it! :D

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