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Review:hpgrl says:
Hi lily! I saw that this was a companion piece to Adventure so I had to read it :P

I love the mood you set here- somber and reflective, it kind of fills me with peace, but I still feel the nagging worry in the back of my head that Hermione feels.

When you say it was the last day he would be completely hers- I didn't get exactly what you were referring, its hard to gauge his age. But that's what I love about it, it could apply to so many different point in his life when he'd have to move on- so I'm glad you left it vague :)

great job! and wonderful writing as always.

Author's Response: Hi Jade! :D

It's meant to be right before Hugo leaves for Hogwarts--I tried to get in there that it was late August, to hint at it, but you're right, that isn't /entirely/ make-or-break of a situation :)

Thanks so much for reviewing--I'm kind of experimenting with different styles, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!


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