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Review:BellaFan202 says:
Here's your review! :)

I really liked this. :)

I agree with Fluer. Muffins are amazing. I want one (or more) now. :P Preferably chocolate chip. Haha.

I think Fluer was characterized well, especially with wanting to be the brightest woman in the room, but still sweet at the same time.

I didn't find any grammar mistakes, so I compliment you and/or your beta on that front. :)

This was very interesting, and I was really pulled into it almost as soon as I started reading, stopping only to answer my phone when my mom called. :P

Feel free to request another review when the next chapter is up. :)

10/10
~BellaFan202~
(LiveLaughLoveHarryPotter on the forums)

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for reviewing so quickly :)

I'm so glad you liked it -- and yes, muffins are amazing. Blueberry and chocolate chip are my favorite. Anyway, that's beside the point :)

I'm happy that you thought I characterized Fleur well, since she's a little different from the characters I usually write. The grammar is all me, no beta, so I'm glad that came across flawlessly for you! *smiles proudly*

So glad it held your interest. I'll definitely think about re-requesting when I get chapters two and three up. Thanks again! :)

academica


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