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Review:Roots in Water says:
Oh my gosh! I love this! I think that your beginning was fabulous- I loved the fire metaphor and how you used it to describe Draco's change. You managed to cover a lot in just under 2000 words- his feelings immediately after the battle, his regret & fear, his determination to change... It was all beautifully done.

You have a really interesting plot and a great style of writing. I think it was a great idea for Draco to get away from England and his former self- it was so true that he would constantly be judged for being a Death Eater and supporting the Dark side, no matter if he had been pardonned or not. I think he chose an interesting career, one that truly shows how much he's changed.

I found the Auror mentality you mentioned very interesting. Of course there would be an effect to living a lifetime of danger and experiencing the many horrors involved in battle on a regular basis. I can't even imagine what that would be like.

As well, you're progressing your plot very well. He has to go back to England. He has to face his past... What will happen? It's very intriguing! And your preview is great- will Draco potentially have to charge his own father with a crime?

All in all, I'm really enjoying your story. Keep updating!

Author's Response: Wow, you actually read all three chapters! Thank you! I really wanted to make a statement with the prologue, so I'm glad that came through. It makes me incredibly happy when anyone tells me they like this, so thank you so much!
-Naida

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