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Review:xtinjsc says:
Oh no! I thought something might be up when Calliope's friend didn't make it to the train in chapter one... So sad. Yes, sad - just like Calliope says, where she takes away the big words and strips them down to there simplest core. There are so many moments in your writing where you write the gut punching sentences that just get me. It takes so much talent to consistently take a readers breathe away, but you have such a way with words that it continues to happen in this chapter.

I love that Calliope doesn't particularly like Lily. In so many fan fiction, we see Lily as this perfect person who everyone either adores or is jealous of. It's nice to see a character who feels neither way. Nawww, James. I love the line about how it wasn't indifference, but ignorance that kept any note of sympathy from his voice. And when you talk about Anna and Calliope and how close their friendship really was, considering there was so little speaking involved, it was just so bittersweet. And it's so terribly sad when she's at Anna's funeral and can't find a way to speak, but stays locked in by her silence. I'm surprised to feel a closeness to Anna when we never even meet her, when she's dead by chapter two. But the way Calliope's thoughts form for her friend, it really makes an impact when we find out she will never be shown in the story. And the ending was just simple, sad, and perfect. Another gorgeous, gorgeous chapter! ^_^

xtinjsc (Hufflepuff)

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