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Review:orangezauber says:
This is a pretty amazing start to a story.

The writing has a great flow to it (and believe me, I am all about the flow of a story). Your descriptions really sent images drifting through my mind.

I think one of the things I like best about this so far is the almost role reversal of James and Sirius. So many people write Sirius as being the one who always has a girl hanging off his lips. It is really refreshing to see that it is James (even if the excuse is to get over another girl). The fact that James has to get over a girl who isn't Lily is a welcome change.

Images and flow...you got it!
Thanks for taking the time to post this story. I am sure I will continue to enjoy it.

Always,
orangezauber

Author's Response: This is a pretty amazing review!

Thank you very much first of all for the lovely compliments, I love when people not only enjoy the story, but my writing as well, although I must admit I do have much to work on.

I think that both Sirius and James have that 'player' aspect to them, something which becomes more apparent throughout the story, however James is showing it a bit more because he's hurt. I'll stop there in fear for giving the rest away seeing as you're on the first chapter. :)

James loving Lily I can understand, but I wanted to write a story based around the idea of, what if James fell in love with someone else along the way?

Thank YOU for taking the time to review, I do appreciate it and I certainly hope you continue to enjoy it! :)

xoxo


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